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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #30 on: February 12, 2016, 01:54:03 PM »

I'm now curious and need to read it. Some of my friends recommended it to me awhile ago but I had no way to obtain it without my parents noticing but now I can and I really wanna read it 0-0

And Pan, you should totally do the weaving stories thing
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #31 on: February 12, 2016, 01:59:05 PM »

Well I definitely don't need to worry about my parents disapproving :P

I think I'm gonna do the weaving stories thing. The second draft is probably gonna end up like twice as long as the first ::)
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #32 on: February 12, 2016, 02:02:32 PM »

I'd wait, even if they didn't disapprove. It's one of those things you'll enjoy more when your older [Imo of course]. Read it if you wanna tho.

Can't wait to read your story Pan! ;D
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #33 on: February 12, 2016, 02:09:27 PM »

Why would I enjoy it more when I'm older? Just more life experience? :P
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #34 on: February 12, 2016, 03:01:20 PM »

Basically :P
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #35 on: February 12, 2016, 06:05:59 PM »

Welp. I just reread the scene that was probably the most fun to write and it sucked ::) Rewriting was not as much fun as initial writing and I cannot guarantee that it does not suck now but it at least probably makes sense now maybe I did not expect this scene to be so problematic e-e
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #36 on: February 13, 2016, 06:52:57 PM »

There are so many unintended puns in this scene what happened D:
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #37 on: February 14, 2016, 01:10:01 AM »

Puns, you say?
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #38 on: February 14, 2016, 02:41:54 AM »

Yes e-e
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #39 on: February 14, 2016, 04:36:52 PM »

Welp, I've reached the part in the most need of editing. Here we go D:

Also. While I'm thinking of it. This is probably kind of premature, but would any of you guys be interested/willing to read this draft when I'm done and give me some feedback on it? I totally get it if you can't or don't want to, it's kind of a lot to ask, but it would be neat to share with you and more eyes are always better :)
Really though I'm not sure if I sound passive-agressive but I'm honestly not trying to, I promise I won't be upset if you say no
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #40 on: February 14, 2016, 04:44:48 PM »

Pan you aren't passive aggressive ::) I'd love to read it.
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #41 on: February 14, 2016, 05:00:47 PM »

Awesome! Um. Would you be willing to PM me your e-mail when the time comes? Or should we figure out another way for me to send it?
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #42 on: February 14, 2016, 05:03:04 PM »

You could have it as an attachment in a PM.
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #43 on: February 14, 2016, 05:25:01 PM »

I didn't know you could put attatchments in a PM :o I'll do that, then.
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Re: A place for Pan to babble about their story
« Reply #44 on: February 14, 2016, 06:02:26 PM »

I can't figure out how to put attatchements in a PM e-e

Also. Today I learned that writing an action scene involving five people who all have the same pronouns gets really confusing @-@
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Pan the Imperial Bucket Holder

"Early to bed, early to rise, early to plan the world's demise"
- Catvomitsky
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