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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #15 on: August 07, 2010, 06:19:54 AM »

yeah, pretty much the same for me. I have scored with about 4 poems, and the rest just stink.
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Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #16 on: August 07, 2010, 06:23:06 AM »

lolol wats usually ur inspirations???
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #17 on: August 07, 2010, 06:24:50 AM »

nothing. That's the problem. Usually I'm just writing out of thin air. When I get a good inspiration, I get a good poem.
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #18 on: August 07, 2010, 06:31:06 AM »

the 1 i postd was about my best friend d8n this chick tht...... well its in ther.  so tht rly inspird me
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #19 on: August 08, 2010, 11:53:25 AM »

Ooh, those are really good :)

Here's 2 of my poems I've posted on Inkpop and on another forum:

Panic forming in my mind
Losing sense of space and time
Choking on my words
The room begins to shake and swirl
Mouth going dry
Feels like I'm gonna die
My throat burns and I can't speak
I know I just need to breathe

Steps
Dancing from your heart
Dancing will always be apart
of your soul
without it, you're not whole
Dance your own way,
though not neat
A slight sway
feel the beat
Rapid steps,
Tapping to the Rythm
Slipping up
Not giving a f***
Can't get enough
Never tire you out
You've gotten a little rough
and you're starting to doubt
but it keeps calling you back
So what if skill is what you lack
Your heart won't let it go
And so dance one step at a time
Cause you still need it
and feel it in your soul

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #20 on: August 09, 2010, 05:25:29 AM »

Here is another one of my poems. Not as good as the others, but...

Picture Perfect

I glance, absently curious
at the pretty falsehoods
that make up my inconsequential life.

And I see through the frail perfection
of the world around me
that will someday collapse.

Everything is concealed
behind excuses
to keep us ignorant
and uninformed

If we move the curtain
and peer through the window
what we will see is disaster

That window is a bridge.
 Itís broken and crumbling.
to open the window
and repair that bridge,
the world must change
and set loose itís fears.
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #21 on: August 10, 2010, 01:25:09 AM »

 :o That's awesome!
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #22 on: August 11, 2010, 02:30:48 PM »

I actually have a website with my writing on it.  http://www.riverkali.net is the address.  I'd be most appreciative if everyone would check it out.
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #23 on: August 15, 2010, 08:29:54 AM »

She got an account just to post that?
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #24 on: August 15, 2010, 08:36:52 AM »

I suppose.
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #25 on: August 18, 2010, 10:27:19 PM »



Panic forming in my mind
Losing sense of space and time
Choking on my words
The room begins to shake and swirl
Mouth going dry
Feels like I'm gonna die
My throat burns and I can't speak
I know I just need to breathe



dude, that would make a really good song.
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #26 on: August 19, 2010, 12:58:02 AM »

That sounds like me with a crush LOL.
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I'm not good enough
I'm not what they want
But let me tell you what
I know who I am
~ Outcast, Kerrie Roberts

For one moment
I wish you'd hold your stage
With no feelings at all
Open minded
I'm sure I used to be so free
~ Citizen Erased, Muse

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #27 on: August 19, 2010, 01:03:31 AM »

smile
i once saw a girl, weeping in a corner
i was younger, and she was much older.
i asked "what's wrong?"
she said "life is too long".
i asked what that meant,
and she said "kent"
i asked who that was and where he went.
and she responded with "away"
i said: "don't be sad. put on a smile."
she said "you don't know what it's like to be alone for a while"
a boy came over and said with a smile
"you're not alone"
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #28 on: August 19, 2010, 01:03:49 AM »

sorry, i'm not much of a poet
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #29 on: August 19, 2010, 01:05:12 AM »

Actually, you don't know what that one means to me.  :)
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I'm not good enough
I'm not what they want
But let me tell you what
I know who I am
~ Outcast, Kerrie Roberts

For one moment
I wish you'd hold your stage
With no feelings at all
Open minded
I'm sure I used to be so free
~ Citizen Erased, Muse

~THE WESTERFORUM'S RESIDENT SPECIAL
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