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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #45 on: February 14, 2011, 07:49:29 AM »

I can't find my notebook. Here is what I have from memory:

Ebony skin
Paper thin
Barely containing
what little's remaining
of angels whose
blood flows like tears

Withering rose
Nobody knows
Just how long it will last
but then, nobody asked
the angels whose
blood flows like tears

Inky  black hair
maiden so fair
A curtain to hide
From all their prying eyes
for the angels whose
Blood flows like tears

I think this is right...
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #46 on: February 23, 2011, 04:21:44 AM »

The Crushing Saga
By Nyk Morris


1.3.11
You leave me more confused than before I saw you.
Am I alone in feeling this?
Is it the same for you?
Do you feel sparks?
Chemistry?...
Heat?...
Me…?...

®1.4.11®
Is it you?®
®You?
No. It can’t be.®
®I thought it impossible…
Yet, here I stand.®
®With you.
Unbelievable…®
®Yet within full grasp.
An Unreal and true®
®Lie…?...





1.4.11.2?
What if?
What if the world were a different place?
What if we’re to be?
What if I fit into the nook of your arm,
The mold of your chest?
What if I’m dreaming?

1                  5                  11
Seeing this again
Everything feels so thin.
Looking through a closed door
To a world you can’t go in.
My heart cries,
As do my eyes,
The world spawning lies.

11.7.1
.gnilims llits tub detartsurF
.uoy ta dam eb t’nac I
.yad ym sekam uoy gnieeS
,emityreve ni em llup uoY
.uoy fo hguone teg t’naC
.enihsnus thgirb ekil s’tI

17112            17112            17112
You fill me with such joy that I write poetry
Once more.
It won’t have to rhyme.
It doesn’t matter.
All I know is that
All we know is falling…
Together.

-.-0.--
Strange to slip into an easy rhythm
We fall into a gentle stream.
-.-0.--
An easy beat to dance to
Things feel real when I’m with you
-.-0.--
I want you more.
You more.
More
-.-0.--

1.11.11
Waiting on what I hope will come
Wanting what may be
Wishing for time with you
Time spent letting
Things bring us together
Thinking about you
Moments Praying

1.11.11.2
You play girls like a game
Will I be the one to tame
This wild side so I can see
The gentle layer that I seek
The you no one else knows
The care for me it shows

1.13.11
I suppose it may be time for me to pull
Away from what could happen with me and
You must know what I am thinking
Seeing this other
Meaning I really hope you
Stay

1.13.11.2
Consuming?
Riveting?
I wonder what
Kissing you would be
Like?
Would it make me swoon?
Would there be heat?
Fully Chaste, of course.
But wonderful?
Real…?

1.14.11
I need your warmth
Longing draws me to you
You hold me to Earth
You make me swoon
So give me your fingers
Entwined in mine
Your touch lingers
Forever in my mind
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You thought you knew this angel when you really released all the dark inside and set free the evil.

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #47 on: February 23, 2011, 09:41:10 AM »

Whats with the numbers and copyright symbols and stuff?
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Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #48 on: March 10, 2011, 04:14:47 AM »

i didn't mean for those to be in there. but some of the other symbols are supposed to be....i dunno, i just wanted it like that.

are they good???
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #49 on: March 10, 2011, 07:10:34 AM »

Why Is the world out to get me? Do they know what I am? Why is it no one gets me? Is there anyone in this world that I can trust or do they just want me for lust? I thought he would have come for me by now but his still not here. Did I do something wrong? Where is my love he told he he'd save me and yet he isn't here to wipe my tears away today. Is there something wrong with me? I mean besides being  what I am. How I miss him so my dear sweet Derek





thats only part of it i have 8teen pages plus a prologue
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #50 on: March 10, 2011, 10:30:57 AM »

A new song-ish thing I wrote that has a great possibility of sucking beyond belief. Sometimes it does that.

Leave It All Behind


CHORUS:

So let me run
Past the moon, past the stars
Let me play hide and seek
Shy away from the sun

VERSES:

I will wither
I will fade
Leave behind
What lives in vain

I will crumble
I will fall
Leave behind
Existence small

CHORUS

I may smile
And I may laugh
But really
I can't face the past

I may skip
And I may sing
But that's just a mask
That memories bring

CHORUS

I can leave
And I can go
A nobody
That you don't know

I can flee
And I can scram
Since you don't see
Just who I am

CHORUS

You don't see
Just who I am
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Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #51 on: March 10, 2011, 03:43:29 PM »

thats good!
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #52 on: March 10, 2011, 03:44:21 PM »

thanks. A lot of time I don't know whether things are good or not because I show all my work to TTB, and as far as I can tell, she is crazy biased.
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Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #53 on: March 10, 2011, 03:48:05 PM »

awe i see (no i really do)
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #54 on: March 10, 2011, 03:49:37 PM »

And if I show most of my work to anyone else, they will freak and think I'm suicidal, so yeah, all I get is biased-ness most of the time
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Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #55 on: March 10, 2011, 04:45:25 PM »

LOL you to? All my stuff is really dark . i only show the not so dark stuff on here LOL!
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #56 on: March 10, 2011, 11:01:30 PM »

I have a part of my book, but I haven't finished the chapter, and I'm feeling lazy right now. >.<
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #57 on: March 11, 2011, 12:16:54 PM »

LOL you to? All my stuff is really dark . i only show the not so dark stuff on here LOL!
Yeah, I only post the light stuff on here... it's kind of shame cuz I think my darkest poetry is the best, but, you know... it's REALLY dark.
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Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #58 on: March 19, 2011, 03:30:31 AM »

My poems and songs are really dark. i don't know how people will respond to it
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Re: A Place To Post Your Original Writing
« Reply #59 on: March 19, 2011, 08:00:40 AM »

It seems like we all write crazily depressing stuff, so I don't think anyone will be too freaked out.
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you
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