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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #210 on: March 04, 2011, 01:14:51 PM »

EEKS!
DOes he die?
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #211 on: March 04, 2011, 01:16:49 PM »

Unfortunately, Eddie Malone is at least being mentioned in Goliath, and probably making an appearance. He's one of the two people who don't know Deryn's secret already who I think can figure it out (the other being Dr. Barlow, obviously) so he may have a seriously major role.
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I actually think Barlow knows already.  She's just making Deryn believe that it's about her age.  I actually think she's smarter than Volger, so if he knows, she most definitely knows.

Yeah, I think she might know. I probably should have put "He's one of the two people who don't explicitly know Deryn's secret already" because if Dr. Barlow knows, neither Deryn nor Alek have figured out that she knows. In Alek's case, it would be that he realizes Dr. Barlow and Volger know the same secret about "Dylan" (At that point, he would probably demand to know the secret and he might be told (if he's told at that point, it would be by Volger). Hopefully, he won't figure out if Dr. Barlow knows.)
Now that I'm thinking about it, Dr. Barlow might know but won't mention anything about it since she is also a woman in a man's profession and knows Deryn's frustration. Dr. Barlow may feel a solidarity with Deryn if she knows or when she finds out.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #212 on: March 04, 2011, 01:17:43 PM »

EEKS!
DOes he die?

*evil and controlling laugh* Mwahahahahhaha!


Isaac's POV

Isaac calmly bound Alek’s hand to a taunt rope on the skin of the godless creature; he didn’t want his prize to go rolling off the side. He looked over the unconscious body with a professional air. It was time; say bye-bye to the stubborn aristocrat in his way. From inside a cleverly hidden pocket in his posh jacket, he pulled a small syringe, filled to the brim with clear liquid. Onto part two of the plan.
Isaac hesitated, holding the needle over several parts of Alek. Where was that bloodstream junction again? Wasn’t it in the wrist, or something? Well, who cared? The poison would get to every system, no matter what. Without further ado, Isaac plunged the syringe into Alek’s neck, careful of the windpipe. The affects would start to show up in a few minutes, and by then the prince could be awake. It was time to scram. Isaac cast one last smirk in the direction of his victim before descending into the godless beast to his cabin.

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #213 on: March 04, 2011, 01:33:00 PM »

YES! Yes! yes! HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH YAY!!!!!!! BTW, who is Isaac?
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #214 on: March 04, 2011, 01:36:09 PM »

have you read earlier ones? he is a new passenger on the Levi who Alek finds annoying, and Deryn made a generalization that he is cunning. When he came aboard, he stared at Alek rather ominously.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #215 on: March 04, 2011, 02:07:39 PM »

yeah, I read a bunch of earlier ones, must have missed a few.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #216 on: March 04, 2011, 02:14:21 PM »

well, Isaac is the antagonist in my fanfic.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #217 on: March 04, 2011, 02:49:06 PM »

*shrugs* cool. If he's against Alek, then it's all good.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #218 on: March 04, 2011, 02:53:48 PM »

Isaac Clarke? Kickass.... X3

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #219 on: March 05, 2011, 08:33:47 AM »

When I first read Leviathan, I thought Dr. Barlow knew Deryn's secret. But when I read Behemoth, I figured maybe she really didn't know. Of course, I think she might have a strong suspicion now.

I really thought she was going to discover Deryn's secret first, not Volger. But I think it was better for Volger to find out first. Besides, it was funny :D

That's exactly what I thought... I would have bet money that she knew. Though now, I realize that what I interpreted as her knowing was just her bluffing sneakiness. We know her a lot better as a character now. I think that with her loris she will figure it out very early in Goliath.

I also think she'll figure it out in Goliath, (if she hasn't already), then wait for Deryn to tell her herself. But perhaps she's known Dylan was a Deryn all along, and that's why she's taken such the strong liking to her. And as mentioned earlier by bunniesandcaffeine if she knows she's a girl, she might want to keep this secret out of admiration or personal preference.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #220 on: March 05, 2011, 08:35:06 AM »

Also, this new part of the story is extremely awesome! Lethal injections? Kind of creepy but hey! It's original on here, and cool! :)
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #221 on: March 16, 2011, 12:16:15 PM »

Pain. A dull, thudding throb from the back of his head, and a much sharper prick from his neck. Alek forced his heavy eyelids open. The world wouldn’t shape itself properly, and major sections seemed blurry. His limbs seemed glued down to. Nothing would move. What happened? He was on the ground; that much was sure. Could he have slipped?
Alek lurched to his feet, none to graceful. His legs still wouldn’t work right. He decided that he should probably lie down for awhile; his head was feeling decisively odd. He stumbled to the ladder leading into the beast.
Suddenly a dizzying wave crashed over him; the surface under his feet lurched, and the floor came rushing up to meet him. His head felt like a beast was clawing at it, trying to get in. He curled into a fetal position, trying to protect his head form this animal attacking. Alek could even see the monster; it was standing in front of him, making loud whistling sounds and shouting insistently. That was all his eyes registered as the monster swallowed him whole.

sorry if you're confused, but one of the symptoms is hallucination and this is from Alek's POV. there really isn't a monster there, actually, it's Deryn
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WHAT WOULD JESUS DO?

STABIMUS FEROCIORIS We will stand defiant.
the JUNIOR MINTS will get you in your sleep (Gone MG reference!)
FIDDLEDINK! it's epic.
Hey look! A distraction!
*******
ALEK IS BETTER

*Ba dump chhh*
People say psycho like it's a bad thing

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #222 on: March 16, 2011, 12:21:13 PM »

he's gonna die! He's gonna die!


... he is gonna die, right?
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #223 on: March 16, 2011, 12:22:17 PM »

he might, or he might have something worse coming for him. this is just the tip of the iceberg!
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WHAT WOULD JESUS DO?

STABIMUS FEROCIORIS We will stand defiant.
the JUNIOR MINTS will get you in your sleep (Gone MG reference!)
FIDDLEDINK! it's epic.
Hey look! A distraction!
*******
ALEK IS BETTER

*Ba dump chhh*
People say psycho like it's a bad thing

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #224 on: March 16, 2011, 12:22:57 PM »

yay! Problems for Alek!
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Attitudes are contagious. Mine can kill you
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