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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #30 on: January 31, 2011, 09:49:35 AM »

Derybn is annoying, and no one ever writes fanfic where she dies. It annoys me, but I'm too lazy to write fanfic myself.

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #31 on: January 31, 2011, 09:54:24 AM »

Oooh where?
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #32 on: January 31, 2011, 10:21:02 AM »

The thread: THE KISS
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #33 on: January 31, 2011, 10:22:02 AM »

Explains why I didn't see it.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #34 on: January 31, 2011, 10:22:21 AM »

Yeppers.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #35 on: January 31, 2011, 10:22:54 AM »

If you wanted me to read it, you shouldn't have called it "The kiss".
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #36 on: January 31, 2011, 10:23:11 AM »

Sorry.   :-[
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #37 on: January 31, 2011, 06:31:00 PM »

That was good some people don't try and copy the writer's style so well done.
But sadly there is no competition for the real thing! :'(
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #38 on: February 02, 2011, 08:33:35 AM »

Ok, so it's still in progress, but here it is....

Alek sat despondently in the bare seat next to Dylan's bed, or whatever his-or her- name was. He had been the only person to stay with his best friend all through the night in the sick bay. Dr. Barlow and Volger had occasionally popped in, but never for very long, and Nerkirk had work to do. For the umpteenth time, Alek scanned his friend's body, with the shirt open, exposing the revealing curves, whipped open for examining the small bullet wound in the stomach from the German attack, hoping that he had imagined the...curves that didn't belong on Dylan's body. But they were still there.
Suddenly Dylan's eyes fluttered. "Barking spiders! Its cold!" he or she shrieked, voice an octave higher than usual. Unfocused eyes hazily took in Alek, sitting stunned by the bed. "G'mornin'" came the slurred greeting. "Whatcha staring' at?"
Sighing, Alek said, "You." Finally noticing the open shirt, Dylan gasped. Scrambling franticly for something to cover up, she finally selected the thin sheets on the next bed over, and clutched them to her chest.
“It’s too late,” he said in a resigned tone. “Everyone has seen.”
Her eyes widened. “Everyone?” she looked down at her cursed chest. The unwanted proof.
“Why didn’t you tell me?” Alek said with barely suppressed tension.
“I tried, I really did, but the stupid Germans always barged in, or you said the wrong thing, and then Lilith-“
Alek cut her off. “Don’t bring Lilith into this,” he said abruptly.
“Right, so, don’t be mad at me! Please!” she was getting stressed now, that much was clear from her raising tones.
“Shhhhh! They might here.” Alek warned under his breath. “And…I’m not mad.”
“Thank you.”
An awkward silence followed.
“So……..” she was cut off by Alek pitching forward and kissing her on the cheek. He quickly scrambled out of the room, leaving a stunned girl sitting in silence, trying to comprehend what just happened. “Barking spiders,” she muttered.

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #39 on: February 02, 2011, 02:07:58 PM »

Ok, so it's still in progress, but here it is....

Alek sat despondently in the bare seat next to Dylan's bed, or whatever his-or her- name was. He had been the only person to stay with his best friend all through the night in the sick bay. Dr. Barlow and Volger had occasionally popped in, but never for very long, and Nerkirk had work to do. For the umpteenth time, Alek scanned his friend's body, with the shirt open, exposing the revealing curves, whipped open for examining the small bullet wound in the stomach from the German attack, hoping that he had imagined the...curves that didn't belong on Dylan's body. But they were still there.
Suddenly Dylan's eyes fluttered. "Barking spiders! Its cold!" he or she shrieked, voice an octave higher than usual. Unfocused eyes hazily took in Alek, sitting stunned by the bed. "G'mornin'" came the slurred greeting. "Whatcha staring' at?"
Sighing, Alek said, "You." Finally noticing the open shirt, Dylan gasped. Scrambling franticly for something to cover up, she finally selected the thin sheets on the next bed over, and clutched them to her chest.
“It’s too late,” he said in a resigned tone. “Everyone has seen.”
Her eyes widened. “Everyone?” she looked down at her cursed chest. The unwanted proof.
“Why didn’t you tell me?” Alek said with barely suppressed tension.
“I tried, I really did, but the stupid Germans always barged in, or you said the wrong thing, and then Lilith-“
Alek cut her off. “Don’t bring Lilith into this,” he said abruptly.
“Right, so, don’t be mad at me! Please!” she was getting stressed now, that much was clear from her raising tones.
“Shhhhh! They might here.” Alek warned under his breath. “And…I’m not mad.”
“Thank you.”
An awkward silence followed.
“So……..” she was cut off by Alek pitching forward and kissing her on the cheek. He quickly scrambled out of the room, leaving a stunned girl sitting in silence, trying to comprehend what just happened. “Barking spiders,” she muttered.



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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #40 on: February 02, 2011, 02:08:52 PM »

you need to go to the fanfic topic and post it
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #41 on: February 02, 2011, 02:10:43 PM »

I'll post it.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #42 on: February 02, 2011, 02:11:49 PM »

It's cute, though I don't know if they would have just left a girl's shirt open even if she was injured. Alek's "I'm not mad" was sweet.  ;D
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #43 on: February 02, 2011, 02:22:45 PM »

Thanks!
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STABIMUS FEROCIORIS We will stand defiant.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #44 on: February 02, 2011, 03:11:02 PM »

So he was checking her out...? It was good though!
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