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Vanilla Ice cream

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Re: While we're waiting for Goliath...
« Reply #15 on: February 06, 2011, 12:39:16 PM »

ok :)
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Re: While we're waiting for Goliath...
« Reply #16 on: February 06, 2011, 12:42:26 PM »

Make sure you continue your fanfics though too.  They're really good.
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Re: While we're waiting for Goliath...
« Reply #17 on: February 06, 2011, 01:58:06 PM »

I'm not sure how to move on with this.  Should Deryn get shot or something?
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Re: While we're waiting for Goliath...
« Reply #18 on: February 07, 2011, 07:27:04 AM »

ok ignore all these they are just my random ideas and notes.
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Re: While we're waiting for Goliath...
« Reply #19 on: February 07, 2011, 07:29:11 AM »

Ok I have been working on this fanfic...
Here is Part one.  I'm trying not to put them in like 30 different parts, but there will be more than two.     
Deryn was sitting in her room, sketching.  She didn’t know why, but she kept drawing people with dark green eyes. 
Then she drew a gun, and a clanker machine, and then a metal heart.
“Deryn Sharp, stop that.  You are not a lovestricken village girl.  He’s just a handsome prince.” she told herself.
Unnoticed by her, the loris on her shoulder cocked its head and thought about these new words.
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She met up with Alek later, to inform him that they were landing in a large city within the hour.
“Finally!! I need some solid ground.  I’ve been working on these engines all day!” he said.
Alek had engine grease all over his face and clothes.  Deryn smiled.
“You better clean up!  The captain is probably going to let you roam the streets a bit, with my supervision.”said Deryn.
“Thats great! I get to take a look at Asia.” Then Alek looked down at his clothes.
“I don’t really look that bad, do I?” said Alek.
“Um, just get some clean clothes.” said Deryn.
“Clothes.  Deryn.” said Bovril.
Deryn froze.
“What is he saying?” said Alek.
“I have no idea” said Deryn *sweating*
“Probably something he picked up somewhere.   I guess I’ll see you in about an hour?” said Alek.
“Make that hour and a half.  I have landing duties.”
“Ok, see ya”
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