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What should I name this Fanfiction?

Just keep it "My Goliath Fanfic"!
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Worlds Apart
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Meant To Be
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Trouble Brewing
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The Bitter Truth
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #30 on: July 13, 2011, 05:49:34 AM »

YES YES YES I LOVE IT I'VE OFFICIALLY DECIDED TO STALK YOU!!!!!!!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #31 on: July 13, 2011, 06:01:00 AM »

Sweet! Loving this fanfic so far!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #32 on: July 13, 2011, 06:03:00 AM »

Awesomegoat, I just hope you're not serious, but I'm glad that you love it!  ;)
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #33 on: July 13, 2011, 06:03:43 AM »

Oh thank you danni, sorry first comment was to Awesomegoat!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #34 on: July 13, 2011, 06:05:45 AM »

Awesomegoat, I just hope you're not serious, but I'm glad that you love it!  ;)


Oh I'm serious >:D
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #35 on: July 13, 2011, 06:15:37 AM »

Thanks all you guys and now the fourth installment is DONE!!!! Hope you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it!

After dinner was over, Alek went down to the bridge to look out over the sea again.  He drew a long breath and waited for something to happen.  There was fog covering the ocean, so he couldn’t see all that was down there.  He felt the presence of another person on the bridge, light, trained footsteps that he had heard over and over again and had learned to memorize as Dylan’s.  But they didn’t belong to Dylan.
   Deryn strode up to him and looked over the side as well, the breeze ruffling her shorn hair.  Her blue eyes glinted with emotion and that small mouth was held pursed.  “A beautiful night.” She said softly, hiding her real voice behind the one he knew so well.  The fake voice.
   “Deryn, you don’t have to pretend for me.” He murmured.
   “I know,” She replied, relenting, “when I met you the first time I knew that this had to happen someday, but I hid from you because it seemed to make no difference that I was a commoner. I was a boy, a friend, and that’s why I had to hide it from you as well as all the others. I was afraid you’d never see me the same again once I told you I was a barking girl.   I knew you’d never tell my secret, but that you’d wonder why I didn’t tell you before now. Now you know.”
   “Well, I’ll never see you quite the same now, that’s for sure.”
   “Aye.  Remember when I told you that the lassies in my family are quite mad?”
   “Yes.”
   “Well, now you know what I mean.” She told him
   “You’re not crazy.”
   “Aye, right.” 
   “You’re not crazy Deryn! We keep no secrets.”
   “I just hope that you don’t apply that rule to the whole ship,” She retorted, ”Not so barking loud, Alek.”
   “Right.  But what about Lil-“
   “Lillit was another matter.  I never wanted to kiss her!”
   Alek thought for a moment.  Deryn had wanted to tell him her secret so many times, but each time she had gotten interrupted by something.
   “Deryn, I’m really sorry about this. I wish I could make it up to you somehow.” Alek replied.
   “You can Alek.” Deryn said
   In that moment, Deryn reached up to kiss Alek. His eyes widened and then it was over. 
   “How was that, then?” Deryn asked. “You do believe me now, right?”
   “Yes,” he replied “Yes I do. I’m so sorry.”
   “Aye, apology accepted.” Deryn answered and walked off.
   Alek stood there, dazed.  Deryn strode down the hall and into the darkness.  The night was beginning to turn blue-black and the stars were shining bright.  Tonight the moon was a bright crescent.  Strafing hawks fluttered around and a kraken tossed and turned below, devouring some sort of ship.  And Alek knew that everything was going to be okay.  He belonged.


Epic kiss scene is epic, hehe. Please tell me if you liked it!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #36 on: July 13, 2011, 06:17:31 AM »

Sorry, it's not a lot.  :(  I guess it just gets stretched out on the forum.  It's like one whole page in 12 font but it sure doesn't look like it. Anyways, size doesn't matter.
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #37 on: July 13, 2011, 06:20:55 AM »

*ahem* I LURVS IT SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #38 on: July 13, 2011, 06:21:17 AM »

Okay then Awesomegoat, I guess siggies really don't lie. Lol!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #39 on: July 13, 2011, 06:23:28 AM »

Yup lawls  :D
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #40 on: July 13, 2011, 06:27:02 AM »

I CAN'T WAIT TILL GOLIATH COMES OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (The exclamation points could go on for miles.....)
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #41 on: July 13, 2011, 06:31:15 AM »

Rainbow bleh!
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #42 on: July 13, 2011, 06:43:20 AM »

Lawls :D
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #43 on: July 13, 2011, 06:46:14 AM »

Yep I might write a fifth because I am very bored right now and this is sooo fun, but I have writer's block right now so I have to think.........
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Re: My Goliath Fanfic
« Reply #44 on: July 13, 2011, 06:47:52 AM »

Oh I just had a brainstorm, hold on....... :o
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