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Anchorgurl1:
Yeah I don't know about the title...
Anyway I wrote a story inspired by Leviathan and since I'm a review egocentric addict I thought I'd post it here :P
Sorry if you don't care/this is in the wrong place!

Closing my eyes and giving off a sigh are the only two things I can do anymore. Thanks to him I have no voice,  no will, no opinion. He's dominate like you in many ways but, not in so so many. The very thought of you sends tears to my eyes. Everyday I go through this...this...depression of sorts.
Everyday I wonder where you are, how you are, and who you're with.
Did you get married? I never pictured you as the type to settle down. The thought of all the women you made swoon makes me both smile and sick. You never knew of me and I guess that has an upside...you would have never fallen for me as I did for you.
I feel a tugging at my arm, it's him, telling that the ball or meeting(I never bother anymore) is over and it's time we make out exit.
I nod curtly to him and stand in waiting as he walks two steps ahead before I move. That's my duty: two steps behind if not on his arm. All the rules I must follow are sickening...if you were him I wouldn't mind to be on your arm. If you were him I'd love to bear your children...if you were him I wouldn't hate myself.
You had to find out in the papers...not face to face. I always wonder if you hate me. Do you?
As I return to my chambers I begin to breakdown, but stop myself. I will NOT show him weakness. I make my way over to the desk at the far side and start another letter to you. Writing all the letters keep me sane they make me feel close to you again even though I never send then to you.
Would you even reply if I did?

MismatchedSocks:
That was sad, but really good!! 
I can picture it being from both points of view. A little bit of Alek in the "I never pictured you as the type to settle down," and a lot of Deryn. (though, I think you were saying it was inspired by Levvie, not actually Leviathan)
I did really like it, and I hope you continue!

Anchorgurl1:

--- Quote from: MismatchedSocks on July 09, 2012, 10:31:46 PM ---That was sad, but really good!! 
I can picture it being from both points of view. A little bit of Alek in the "I never pictured you as the type to settle down," and a lot of Deryn. (though, I think you were saying it was inspired by Levvie, not actually Leviathan)
I did really like it, and I hope you continue!

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Thank you and it was only inspired...

Awesomegoat:
Aw, that was kinda sad, but I still love it!   I like how your sentences run smoothly ^_^

Please, do continue!

Anchorgurl1:

--- Quote from: Awesomegoat on July 12, 2012, 04:49:04 PM ---Aw, that was kinda sad, but I still love it!   I like how your sentences run smoothly ^_^

Please, do continue!

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Thank you! I will!

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